I like this. The composition and texture is pretty nice. It's an eyecatching design.
However, it works more like a print or maybe a teaser poster than a movie poster. The skyline, where the credits would normally be posted, would needed to be darkened so the copy can stand out. There wouldn't be enough contrast, given the font used for copy, for the credits to stand out if it was dark, while light-colored copy would blend in too much. I might try and either use some lorem ipsum credits or copy some from the original posters and experiment with them. If it's more of a teaser poster, I'd probably just use a generic "coming soon" and see if the design still holds up.
However, it works more like a print or maybe a teaser poster than a movie poster. The skyline, where the credits would normally be posted, would needed to be darkened so the copy can stand out. There wouldn't be enough contrast, given the font used for copy, for the credits to stand out if it was dark, while light-colored copy would blend in too much. I might try and either use some lorem ipsum credits or copy some from the original posters and experiment with them. If it's more of a teaser poster, I'd probably just use a generic "coming soon" and see if the design still holds up.
Like I said, otherwise good work.
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